Sunday, January 20, 2013

Six Sentence Sunday 1.20.2013

A new year, a new book. Fallout, a near-future science fiction romance co-written with Jon Kohl, is scheduled for release this week from Books To Go Now. In this scene, Harry's met the beautiful Lisa Bateman in a grocery store checkout line and they're getting acquainted during Lisa's lunch break, seated on a bench in front of the store.

She lifted her bottle and drank the seltzer almost to the bottom, then stirred the remaining beverage with the straw. Her shawl slipped down her forearm and Harry’s gaze caught on three bruises the size of fingers that encircled her wrist. He jerked his attention back to her face as she lowered the bottle to her lap. She half smiled. “So where do you work?”

“I work for a tax accounting firm in town, but I work from home. My schedule is pretty flexible.”

Fallout

by Jon Kohl and Kimberly K. Comeau

Harry Longmeadow flees Philadelphia to escape the big-city terrorism that took his brother’s life. The secret underground shelter he builds in rural north central Pennsylvania is designed to withstand any form of attack. But when an assault comes, the biggest threat isn’t nuclear fallout, but a female writer and homicide charges, for which he has no preplanned defenses.

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24 comments:

  1. Oh my. Those three bruises have us all staring. Good job. : )

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  2. Thanks, Tara, for stopping by and commenting.

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    1. Eppp! It's an invasion of the Tara(h)s! Seriously, thanks for stopping by and commenting Tarah (and Tara).

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  4. The tell tale bruises will have a lot to tell.
    Nice six.

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    1. Frank, you're right. Thanks so much for stopping by. Your six sentences stick in my mind. I'm going to have to hunt up your books.

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  5. Oh no! Of course, we all want to hear more about those bruises.

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  6. The book will be released any day now, Dee. Thanks for visiting and commenting.

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  7. Great six. Intriguing. Leaves me with all kinds of questions.

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    1. Oh Jerrie, you've made my day. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

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  8. Intriguing six, especially the bruises, of course.

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    1. I'm glad they intrigued you, Paula. I appreciate your response.

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  9. Love the description and the bruises are a great hook. Great 6 :)

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    1. Thank you, Clare. I appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback.

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  10. Good luckk with the book. It sounds really good. the bruises do catch your attention.

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    1. Thanks, Elaine. I'm going to miss you when 6SS ends. I'll try my best to keep up with your career through the booksellers.

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  11. An intriguing six! I like how he added in that last line. You know, just in case. ;)

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  12. There's another story with those bruises. Great six, Kimberly. :)

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    1. There is indeed, Siobhan. Thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comment.

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  13. Definitely an intriguing six! Congrats on the new release. :)

    Donna

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  14. Thanks so much, Donna. It's always good to see you. Luck with all your writing.

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  15. I love how you slipped in that intriguing detail of the bruises. You definitely captured my interest!

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