Sunday, May 13, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday 5.13.2012

Excerpt from Moons' Kiss. (In this scene, the women are sitting on the ground.)
Desperation replaced Denassa’s dismay.  “We can leave Kayarra at camp, go on to Rajma’s Head ourselves--tonight--and be back before midday.”
“No, Denassa,” Yutrenta said quietly.
Denassa struck the ground with her fist.  “I don’t serve Kayarra!” she shouted.  “If the shecarens have died through our inactions, who will follow us, who will dare to?
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  1. I like Denassa's feistiness even in the face of desperation. Great six!

  2. I'm intrigued by your six lines straight away. Unusual names, a feisty heroine (I presume?) sounds a fab story :-)